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johnfoxarmy (100 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
live game torch movin on join up
http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19460
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Barnaby (100 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
Another Chance to Live
5 min, 20 D, 20 minutes to start.
gameID=19456
21 replies
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Puddle (413 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
Just a little Piece
I'm up late writing stories for my creative writing class, here's one I particularly like, mostly because I'm intentionally doing things to create an effect, not that my teacher ever taught us any of these but still. Anyways I hope no one is offended by "Nigger, Negro, or Jap" I was trying to capture a little bit the time period. its not to fleshed out because its not supposed to be. Let me know what you think, and if you have any questions.
Puddle (413 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
Hello, my name is Norton. I was born August 23, 1914. I was born in a small town in Kentucky, the names not important. Being born at the very start of World War One had an effect on my life and my parents’ impression of me. Shortly after my birth my father decided to go off and fight in the Great War, even though the US wasn’t even in it yet, he sailed off to Britain and enlisted there. His departure left a scar on my mother’s heart and throughout my life she never forgave him. With him gone she had to support herself and me and take care of the new born, also me. However being a strong southern woman she did just that.
I was raised from an infant to a toddler in a small rented cottage out on one of the subsistence farms, our neighbors were Negroes. They would sing as they worked their own fields, and, though my mother disapproved, I became fast friends with the son of the woman from a few houses over, his name was Ronald, a strange name for a Negro, but it suited him just fine. He was always getting himself into trouble, and always skip-stepping (that’s what we called telling quick, believable lies real fast) his way out of it, all with that bright happy smile on his face at all times. I never even saw him frown until we were 10.
It was in September of that year, 1924, that he told me he was moving. They all were, all the colored families I mean. See, the man who owned the land that we all rented had made it big in the stock market, and he was taking his family away from the south and all the “dirty, lazy, niggers,” as he was wont to say when he went from cottage to cottage collecting the rent in December. Anyways he had sold his land to the man who owned all the land to the west of us. He was an old southerner, he had run along with the confederate soldiers back during the war, and he hated colored folks. He was rich, his family always had been, so he could afford to leave lots of his land, and he often did, he only rented to whites. After Ronald and his mom got on the bus and were driven away I never saw them again.
After I graduated high school I thought about going to college, but our dean told me I had as much of a chance as a “blind one armed nigger” of getting into even a state school. As I was walking home after my last day of school I passed the recruiting office for the Army, and thought I go inside and have a look, at least it would get me out of the sun. In a short half hour conversation, that recruiter had me signed up and damn excited about it. I ran home to tell my parents. My mother was proud and hugged me. My father just looked at me, then lit his pipe and when into the back room. I left a month later, June 28th, 1932.
For 10 years I trained, led men in mock battles, advanced up the ranks and eventually became a staff sergeant. I even had a girlfriend for a few years. She was pretty, a lot of fun, but possessive and easily disgruntled, she moved on a little after me. For 10 years I spoke only with my mother, my Father died August 23rd, 1939, my birthday. The only time he ever acknowledged it.
When the Japs bombed Pearl Harbor and brought the war to us, I grabbed my gear and shipped out with everybody else. Today is June 7th 1944, I’m lying on a sandy beach in northern France. Dawn is just beginning to touch the sky. The sand all around me is wet, and it isn’t water. The sun is rising but it’s just getting darker and darker, now I’ll never know whether or not we got the beach or not.
ottovanbis (150 DX)
19 Jan 10 UTC
some big gaps there! nice description in places, a little redundant and wordy in others. good sentence variety. maybe you could establish tone just a bit more through diction. not too shabby for a rough draft.
Puddle (413 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
haha thanks otto, its going to stay a rough though, Im turning them all in tomorrow. However a few that i do might get expanded on their own, I like the idea I have for a few of them. When I finish this next one, Ill post it in this thread as well. The prompt for this last one was a Fictitious Auto-Biography. The gaps were intentional, meant to bespeak of a few clear meaningful moments in the man's life, filled by porbably eventful but unimportant (from his standpoint) periods. I might actually come back to this one. I was trying to characterize Ronald strongly without actually saying much, I hope I did so.
Puddle (413 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
Dialogue Story

Dialogue Story

Hubert wearily walked up to the door, ploddingly putting one foot in front of the other, growing nearer to the door step with each lifting, advancing, and settling of his foot. A short step up and he was standing squarely and solidly on the doormat. His left hand holding a bloated and strained briefcase, he had to use his right hand for the task ahead. Tiredly, almost dejectedly he lifted his harm, first bending upward at the elbow, his fingers outstretched and reaching, then lifting the whole apparatus skyward from the shoulder, stopping with his fingertips just brushing the rounded edge of the teardrop shaped brass door knocker. A short, jerky jab forward and his hand was securely wrapped around the fattest part of the knocker. Having thus anchored his arm, he let the life fad from it, and it hung limply between his shoulder and the knocker. Sighing with defeat, Hubert knocked.
“Hello Ma’am! How are you today?” He waited only just long enough to see the person’s gender before speaking.
“Hello, I’m fine. Who are you?” She said, each word harried and rushed out. She peered out, a face tight and pinched, young but clearly over worked, and stressed. She squinted not from the brightness of the day but from sheer exhaustion, the kind of exhaustion that causes the paranoia makes every unknown a potential new chore to be dealt with. She was wearing a dingy apron over a blue collared shirt and loose fitting blue jeans.
“My Names Hubert, and I’m here to brighten up your day, you week, your life! You appear to be a busy woman, lots of things to do, lots of people to see, and just not quite enough time to get everything done. Is that you?”
“Well I am—“
“Of course it is! Now I think I’ve got just the thing for you, actually I should say things. I’ve got this wonderful little day planner that will beep to let you know when you need to stop doing one thing and move on to the next. It really is so great, it goes through all of this year and even the next too! Its leather bound and lined and all of that.” Hubert enthusiastically said, his words bouncing out and bouncing into the ears of the woman, bounced around inside her head, and really just annoyed her.
“Actually no, thank you, but I already have one of those. I really must be getting back to—“
“Oh that’s fine I’ve also got one of these, these really are top of the line, this little gadget does everything for you, you plug into it everything you need to do for the whole week, and it makes a schedule for you, connects to the internet, makes all you appointments for you, calls anyone it needs to and then prints out this schedule for you to follow. How’s that sound?” Hubert’s words were really starting to anger the woman. She was busy and hated to spend money anyways.
“Look I really need to get to those dishes, so I’m sorry, perhaps another time.” She really was mad, but she hated to be impolite.
“Well hold on, just one more minute of your time, I have this other product, it relieves stress!” Hubert was really sounding rather pathetic now, and the door was easing closer and closer to its frame, “Here I’ll get you the pamphlet—“ The door slammed shut. The bolt slid home. “—for it.” He finished lamely. Hubert stared at that brass knocker for a moment, studying the distorted reflection of himself looking out. He reached into that obese briefcase of his, pulled out the afore mentioned pamphlet, stuck it under the door mat, and turned to tiredly sadly walk away. A Salesman’s a salesman.




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onamatapia (103 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
Will anyone play my live game?
Here is the link: http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19451

please join. It'll be a blast!
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johnfoxarmy (100 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
LIVEGAME!!!!!!!
http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19449
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moses (124 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
new live game!
live game starting in a little while
join up if youre feeling it
http://www.webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19448
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johnfoxarmy (100 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
LIVE FIVE MIN TURNS!!!!!
http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19447
1 reply
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superman98 (118 D)
15 Jan 10 UTC
Favorite Country to play as?
I was wondering what your favorite country(s) to play as are. More Details inside.
38 replies
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msmth82 (579 D)
17 Jan 10 UTC
How are the units sorted in the orders list?
They appear to be sorted by the their age, descending.
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denis (864 D)
14 Jan 10 UTC
So the United STATES of America...
Technically 50 different countries... Or at least that was the original idea.
Do you treat your state as a country? What do you think is good or bad about this system ( 50 differeent mini govermentd under one super goverment)?
52 replies
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idealist (680 D)
15 Jan 10 UTC
Haiti
I hope many of you have heard about the devastating news from Haiti, where millions of Haitians lost their lives to an earthquake happened merely last weekend.
24 replies
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Crazyter (1335 D(G))
18 Jan 10 UTC
Win versus Draw AKA When to Stab
I have a high Draw rate and a low Win rate. Looking to do something about that. Seeking advice.
19 replies
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bbdaniels (461 D(B))
18 Jan 10 UTC
A Possible Solution to the Pause Problem
After reading a number of complaints about the problem of the pause, I have one suggestion to offer: each pause lasts as long a a phase length would.
30 replies
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Jefe (100 D(S))
18 Jan 10 UTC
Live and Private (Password) Games
Is it a good idea to give Live and Private (Password) games their own tabs instead of being grouped with the new games? Recently I am seeing more of these games than anything else, and it would be nicer to see just the games I can actually play.
2 replies
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Puddle (413 D)
18 Jan 10 UTC
Help?
Vista is screwing me over, firefox may be helping it do so, any one who could help me?
13 replies
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jeromeblack (129 D)
19 Jan 10 UTC
Live Game
http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19440

Join Now Starts in 30 Minutes!
3 replies
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flashman (2274 D(G))
17 Jan 10 UTC
Just found the camera I want and I cannot afford it.
Just thought I'd share my disappointment...
17 replies
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orathaic (1009 D(B))
18 Jan 10 UTC
How do we teach Jesus's message without teaching about God
the question - 'how do we teach Jesus's message without teaching about God' - i feel it is a very important question to answer considering there are a number of atheists in our society - and secular freedoms gives us the right to raise our children a members of any religion or none.
19 replies
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`ZaZaMaRaNDaBo` (1922 D)
18 Jan 10 UTC
Draugnar?
What are you doing in the League D4 game!
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TheGhostmaker (1545 D)
17 Jan 10 UTC
World Cup Pages Updated
http://www.tournaments.webdiplomacy.net/
>Teams Listed
>Groups Announced
We still need a 21st team before we can start this tournament....more inside...
29 replies
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pi r round (0 DX)
18 Jan 10 UTC
Map question
why aren't Baltic sea and Skagarak connected? They are connected in real life.
2 replies
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Mickie (394 D)
18 Jan 10 UTC
Live game in 30 minutes!
http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19431
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superman98 (118 D)
18 Jan 10 UTC
Join this Live Game!!!
Here is a Live Game!!!!
gameID=19430
3 replies
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MadMarx (36299 D(G))
15 Jan 10 UTC
575 Buy-In Anonymous Game
Need three more: Cloud of Unknowing

http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=18836
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orathaic (1009 D(B))
18 Jan 10 UTC
Leagues replacements (still) needed
Anyone not playing in the Leagues who wishes to do so, should email Xapi at xapi (dot) perez (at) gmail (dot) com.

There is at least one open position. (which i'm hoping will be filled soon)
(also i couldn't bump the other thread because it is locked)
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moses (124 D)
18 Jan 10 UTC
new live game!
http://www.webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19425
join up guys
its gonna be a hoot
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selkie (0 DX)
18 Jan 10 UTC
Live WTA
gameID=19423
need 1 more
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chad! (157 D)
18 Jan 10 UTC
Live Game!
all the people who were in awesome-9 join awesome-10, i'm pretty sure it will be...fun : http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=19419
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Soccerstudd12 (100 D)
18 Jan 10 UTC
how do you know
how do you know when the hell a game is supposed to start?
3 replies
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checkmate (0 DX)
18 Jan 10 UTC
two more players
live game starting in 1 minute
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