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Fasces349 (0 DX)
31 Aug 11 UTC
Build Your Dream Nation 2
While Obis mainly composed of the leaders of your nation, lets take it one step further. Lets see how far we can get in writing constitutions :p

I'm off to bed, might start on this tomorrow
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ednos (529 D(S))
29 Aug 11 UTC
Donator Markers
Are the thresholds public, or should I just keep donating until it turns gold?
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Draugnar (0 DX)
29 Aug 11 UTC
What would happen if...
I don't know, but I've always wondered... What would happen if a state told a federal judge who shot down a law to go get bent and enforced it anyhow? I mean, are the feds going to march on Alabama if they enforce their new illegal immigration law? What could they do besides withhold money?
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Maniac (189 D(B))
30 Aug 11 UTC
My policies for tackling UK unemployment
See Inside
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fortknox (2059 D)
30 Aug 11 UTC
Immigration
Since Draug's last thread was directed towards government but mentions immigration, I figured I'd make another thread for immigration so we can have that discussion separately.
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Putin33 (111 D)
30 Aug 11 UTC
Over/Under on Noda lasting a year
And yet there's no clamor to beat up Japan regarding currency manipulation. Noda is the manipulator-in-chief.
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MrcsAurelius (3051 D(B))
30 Aug 11 UTC
World diplomacy needs one more! 50 min to go. 1 day/phase
Cmon guys we need one more! Please join, and earn the gratitude of 16 others!
gameID=66458

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gman314 (100 D)
30 Aug 11 UTC
gman's law
Inspired by Fortknox's version of Godwin's law and by http://webdiplomacy.net/forum.php?threadID=760957#760957 I have formulated my own for this forum.
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King Atom (100 D)
24 Aug 11 UTC
Apparently I'm "Wrong."
Just because I'm against gays, doesn't mean you all need to get offended or yell at me or anything...
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Sydney City (0 DX)
30 Aug 11 UTC
Thank god for the mute button
Enough said! Some players are anally verbose
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Riphen (198 D)
30 Aug 11 UTC
Obvious 2v2 Scenario
Check inside.
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Alderian (2425 D(S))
27 Aug 11 UTC
Aussie Rules Football
I've watched a couple of games now and would like to know more about it. It seems like a very interesting mix of football (soccer), basketball, and American football; but WAY better than football (soccer) and basketball.
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King Atom (100 D)
30 Aug 11 UTC
My Partial Role...
Basically, I'd like to rewrite history...and I need help. If this thread doesn't go to the trolls, I'll explain but knowing this site...
Anyways, I'd just like to create a fiction novel based off of what history maybe SHOULD have been...and of course how I think it WILL be...
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Yellowjacket (835 D(B))
30 Aug 11 UTC
Apparently I'm "wrong" too
Just because I'm against King Atom, doesn't mean you have to get all offended and yell or anything.
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Invictus (240 D)
29 Aug 11 UTC
Gin Rickey
http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=66656
30 D, 24 hour phases, points per center, 10 days to join
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King Atom (100 D)
28 Aug 11 UTC
Feeling Cheated?
Looks like the number of forum cheating accusations has greatly increased. Just to let all of you noobs out there know, the rules have much to say, why don't you read them. If you have a cheating accusation, send it to [email protected] and complain to the mods. This forum is for trolling and other pointless conversations, not to hear you all bitching. Thank you.
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Thucydides (864 D(B))
21 Aug 11 UTC
The Writing Thread
Herein we consolidate all other writing threads. Post your writings for viewing and criticisms here.
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WardenDresden (239 D(B))
24 Aug 11 UTC
Warden's Story
I'm not sure what limits there are on words per post or anything, but below you will find my short story entitled: Flame's Rest. I'll break it up into 2 posts, as the finished product is 3 1/2 pages in word double spaced. Please comment with any advice, critiques or even shameless bumps. :)
WardenDresden (239 D(B))
24 Aug 11 UTC
An explosion rocked the air, shattering the silence of moments before. Shouts rang out, calls for help, and battle cries. Edana rose from her bunk in a stupor- it wasn’t time to wake up yet… Then Father opened her door. “Edana, we've got to run! There’s too many of them, and they soaked themselves, we can’t burn them!” Blearily, Edana stumbled out the door, following her father into the kitchen. She wasn't sure what was going on, but the urgent tone in her father's voice sent her into action. He grabbed a rucksack lying in the corner, their emergency pack, and tied it to her back. "Edana, listen close, because I'm not sure you'll be seeing me again..." As he told her about the attacking men, the shouts outside grew closer. The men were pushing towards their home. "And though your gift is a part of you, you have to hide it. Don't show anyone what you are, or they’ll kill you. Now, get on the horse, and ride as far to the South as you can. If your mother and I can get away, we'll meet you at the foot of the mountains." Edana ran out the back door. To her surprise Firestorm, her family's white stallion stood ready for her. Her mother had been saddling him while Father had been getting her ready. Father picked her up and lifted her into the saddle. With tears starting to run from his eyes he whispered, "Run child, always remember we love you. Now run!" He slapped the horse's rear and Edana raced through the side streets away from the battle cries and shouts for help.
It took a week for her food to run out. And so, with trepidation, Edana rode back into town. She had returned, hoping to find friends or family, or at least something to give her hope others had survived. She rode in through the South gates, burned out buildings on either side flanking the road. They barely stood, with gaping holes where windows and doors used to stand. There weren't any bodies, but her confusion at that was remedied as she approached the town's center. Bodies were piled haphazardly all throughout the square. The scorched remains frightened her, and their stench forced her not to go too close. In the very center was her father, his entire body impaled on a spear. Edana broke down into tears.
WardenDresden (239 D(B))
24 Aug 11 UTC
She could never say how long she lay there crying, but by the time she had gathered enough strength to stand the smell didn't bother her so much. She heard crows and looked back at the pile of corpses in front of her. The burning hadn't been so bad she realized, what really made the bodies look so destroyed was the birds picking at them.

"Shoo! Shoo! Go away birds!" A few of the birds turned at the unexpected sounds, but seeing no threat from the little girl, quickly returned to their feasting. Tears coming up anew, Edana fled. She got back on Firestorm-he hadn't wandered away while she was crying- and tried to go back to her home. Arriving at the ruins, there was even less of it left than she had feared. Not a single timber still stood on another. What furniture that hadn't been consumed by the flames was shattered into pieces along the path. There was nothing left for her here: no friends, no family, no bed, no food, nothing.

"My my my, what have we here?" The sudden voice filled her with fright, spinning around Edana reached into her pocket for her small knife.

"Who-” She barely got the word out of her mouth before the brute slammed into her.

"A little fire-witch come back home? Well Mommy and Daddy aren't here anymore, are they?" The sneer he gave her sent ripples of horror through her slight form. Eyes flicking about, the man saw her pocket and snatched the knife before Edana could even think of a protest. "Oh, and she’s even armed; how cute." Tears once again formed at the corners of her eyes, this time of fear and anger instead of horror and loss. This man was the object of her sudden fury. This man, no, this monster was a part in what had killed her family. Being pinned to the ground left her few options, and this was a full grown man, not one of her playmates, she couldn't just roll him off her; she had to have help or nothing she could do was going to save her. "Well, one more body to add to the pile." He stretched Edana's own knife towards her throat when a sudden peal of neighing broke his concentration. "What the-" He was silenced as a hoof slammed into his face. Flying off her, the man rolled into the ashes of her home. Firestorm had saved her.

"Stupid beast!" To Edana's horror, the man wasn't dead; in fact he only looked angrier than ever. Blood was dribbling down his face from a gash above his eye. "I'll kill you first, and then take care of the karking witch!" Firestorm, leaping over Edana, struck again with his forelegs. But this time, the man was ready; he caught the blows with his hands and twisted one of the horse’s legs with an intensity that stunned Edana just as she was rising to her feet. With one of his front legs now broken, Firestorm didn't stand a chance. The man, drawing his own weapon, a sword, hacked at the horse with wild abandon. Moments later, covered in hot blood, he turned back to Edana. "Now, where were we?" The leer pushed Edana over the brink. She lost herself in a sudden flame of rage. Now it was the man who didn't stand a chance. Fires sprung up from his wrists, cutting his hands off with a swift roar of heat. He screamed as he was quickly engulfed in an inferno. Edana fed the fires all her will and all her grief.

Edana blinked in shock, how could she have done that? Up till now, the largest fires she could call would only be large enough to cook an ant or two. Shock at her new-found power overwhelmed her. Rising completely from the ashes, Edana stared numbly at the remains of her horse. The saddlebags were still there, so she had no choice but to go get them. Stepping gingerly across the newly dead man's corpse, she unstrapped the bags holding what little she still had. The bags were heavy, and deciding she couldn't do much with the heavy stuff anyways, Edana cleared a space and dumped out the pouch. Keeping the dried biscuits that remained, as well as the water bladder, she put her knife back in her pocket as well. Then she started wondering who the man had been. In a sudden burst of inspiration, she scoured the area looking for the man's provisions or camp. Finding what look like a small tent, her heart leapt in hope. Maybe the man had some food stores! Scrabbling across the loose, ash-covered ground between her and the tent, Edana suddenly froze. What if the man hadn’t been alone? Now she crept silently toward the tent, half expecting someone to jump out at her any moment. She reached the tent uneventfully, and felt a surge of relief. The man had been alone. Combing through what was there, she found several pounds of dried meat, and a few camp pots and such. Ignoring the complicated foodstuff, Edana greedily grabbed some of the jerky.

Refreshed by her impromptu meal, Edana looked out at the horizon, the sun would set shortly, and she didn't want to stay anywhere near the remains of her childhood home. Placing the rest of the meat and the man's other travel breads into her saddlebag backpack, Edana decided to set out. Hopefully, she would be able to find someone who could help her, but Edana didn't know if she could even trust anyone but herself to take care of her anymore. Now on foot, Edana left her little village of Flame's Rest behind. The sun casting a shadow far ahead of her, she moved west, leaving everything she knew behind.


Sorry for the cluttered format on the first part, I think I got all the paragraph breaks this time though.
FirstApple (100 D(B))
24 Aug 11 UTC
I good story idea... I can see where you're going with it for sure. Still, the occurrences are so fast that I get lost. Especially the beginning. It was a single paragraph 'prologue' to the story which confused me at first. There should be a little more discussion of the feelings and emotions while she was gone, how she felt as she returned; her fears, her hopes. Things just happen a little too fast I think. Slow it down and I believe you have the making for a great story.
Thucydides (864 D(B))
24 Aug 11 UTC
Wrong thread but I will read it later anyway
Thucydides (864 D(B))
24 Aug 11 UTC
I agree with first apple - large important events take up sometimes only a sentence, like when the man kills the horse. Describe it, if not the actual killing, then what Edana was doing meanwhile, how she felt.

I am myself horrible at describing things, emotions topping that list. But spend a little more time languishing with Edana as she cries. As the narrator, take on the atmosphere of the environment, this one being broken and horrifying. Edana is shocked and horrified but the narrator sounds unconvinced by her emotion. If you know what I mean.
WardenDresden (239 D(B))
29 Aug 11 UTC
shameless bump *cough*


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Scmoo472 (1933 D)
27 Aug 11 UTC
Wow. Is there a mod on?
I need to talk to a mod plz? I am about to be unable to win a game because of either Meta/Multi and I am gonna be pissed.
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kestasjk (99 DMod(P))
27 Aug 11 UTC
Donator icons
Hi guys, I added the donor icons but there were 30 or so people who donated with a different e-mail address than they're using here. If you should have a donor icon but don't e-mail me at [email protected] telling me which e-mail address you donated with.

Thanks again to all who donated, we've just got the 2 year lease for the dedicated host, and everything seems to be going well :-)
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Lopt (102 D)
29 Aug 11 UTC
Live Game
Live Game on 7pm GMT-zone. 10 minutes per move, 50 to join.

Join now!
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Dan-i-Am 88 (358 D)
28 Aug 11 UTC
Hey France. . .
FINALIZE!!!!
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obiwanobiwan (248 D)
29 Aug 11 UTC
Horton the V, Green Eggs and Hamlet--SEUSSPEARE! (Mix-And-Match Writing Thread!)
So, if you haven't seen it...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l3w2MTXBebg

I found it funny (of course) and so did my friends, and we got to wondering...what WOULD happen if the two masters merged? SO--Shakespeare and Dr. Seuss...what would THAT look like? ;) (Feel free to mix other authors, too!) :D
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thatwasawkward (4790 D(B))
26 Aug 11 UTC
Sweeping generalization about a contentious issue.
Broad statement of subjective opinions masquerading as objective fact. Implication that those that disagree are not only in the wrong, but are subhuman. Stop "thinking", humanzees! Listen only to me! My thoughts are kind of a big deal.
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King Atom (100 D)
28 Aug 11 UTC
My Collaborative Writing Thread
Modelling after the other thread, but easier to follow...
Submissions of 150-500 words. And we'll begin by setting the scene.

We'll figure it out as we go along...
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Putin33 (111 D)
28 Aug 11 UTC
Manchester smites you
8-2 and 5-1....Crikey.

Wenger won't survive the season, I think.
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slyster (3934 D)
23 Aug 11 UTC
Partie de haut niveau en français (French InGame Messages)
Bonjour tout le monde,

J'aimerais créer une partie en français avec des joueurs de bon calibre.
Détails plus bas...
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King Atom (100 D)
28 Aug 11 UTC
Accordinly, I Am A Good Leader.
http://www.hulu.com/watch/266520/the-colbert-report-mon-aug-8-2011
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Sharpy (100 D)
28 Aug 11 UTC
Cheaterd
Please, investigate the game
http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=66064 it looks like there are multiple accounts of a same person here. Many users AFK, or making way too stupid moves to belive. I'm talking about a whole America and Turkey with India. Please, investigate, cause the game goes fail because of that.
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StevenC. (1047 D(B))
27 Aug 11 UTC
To those of you in the path of hurricane Irene...
...who's preparing for this storm?
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