I'm not a professor, but I feel like being nosy today.
Germany's build and moves. Given that Germany was attacking Russia, I think he should have built an army. This is further compounded by all the other armies sitting next to Munich. However, I don't think his moves are that bad. He's got North Sea. He can get Sweden back this turn and take Warsaw and maybe take a shot at Moscow or St. Petersburg. The bigger concern is that France is about to get big, and those armies are flowing towards Germany and not away. I'm not sure that Russia actually gets a build here out of Edi, as France can just take it, especially if England has given up. That doesn't necessarily make things better for Germany though.
Turkey: D
Taking Sev is nice, but now you have no friends, no defense, and nowhere to grow. You need to break the kooky, inefficient AI, or bring France in to break it for you (although that might create some problems down the line). I can't see the press, but I fail to see how Italy is benefitting from the current arrangement, or why Austria is ok with the Italian armies hanging out in Ven/Tyr, and yet they're still piling on you.
A/I tactics: I count 9 combined units, and only 2 moved. Of those, only 1 moved in a useful way. First, the bounce in pie is pretty wasteful. If Italy doesn't trust France, he should move on him before he gets bigger. If Italy is allied with Austria, why hang out in Venice and Tyrolia, and why is Austria ok with this?
Taking Greece is good. However, taking it from Albania creates a few problems. First, Italy's fleets are just sitting around, and Italy isn't getting anything out of this. I would have had Italy in Greece with a fleet (which is great for Austria because that fleet isn't moving inland towards the Austrian home centers). It Italy and Austria trust each other, they could also have been much more efficient with the other armies. Taking a shot at Bulgaria, either from Serbia with Trieste filling, or Rumania with Budapest filling, would have been reasonable. If they wanted to take the guesswork out and guarantee Greece this turn, Rumania should have at least supported Sevastaspol to keep Russia onside and Turkey bottled up.
As a side note, Russia attempting to convoy Turkey into Rumania isn't the best either. Yeah, Turkey in Rumania is better than Turkey in Sevastapol, but if dislodged, that army is going to Ukraine and possibly working with Germany (or even Turkey!) against Russia in the fall.